My English progress

My favorite animal is the dolphin. It's an aquatic animal, they are very good swimmers, they don't sleep too much may be three or four hours a day. This animal is very similar to me because I like a lot the water and I think that I'm a good swimmer not better than a dolphin. I don't like sleeping I prefer to do sport or read a book and finally this animal is very intelligent and I know that I'm a little bit intelligent.

This text of here is my first english writing of fourth of ESO, if I compare with one of my last composition (If Iknew back them...) The first BIG difference is the length of the text and the vocabulary, I think that now I use more words and more specific. I believe that the I continue doing a lot of ortografics faults and gramatical problems but anyone is perfect. One thing that shock me is that in this text I don't use any connectors and now I always use a lot of connectors.
If I have to be sincere, I should tell you that the bigest difference is not the length, the vocabulary or the connectors is the effort that I have put to learn more english.